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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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In recent days, there is a noticeable decrease in the number of
people
 intending to become
teachers
, especially secondary-school
teachers
. The essay will discuss
about
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the reasons for
this
 and draw upon an insight toward is matter. One of the main causes is
teachers
’ low wages compared to many other jobs. In
UK
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the UK
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, an architect,
also
 a white-collar worker, is paid annually
far
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 more than a teacher with the same experience.
This
 is obviously not enough for educators to make ends meet . As a consequence, they will lack the incentive to teach . To tackle
this
 issue, the government should raise the salaries for
teachers
 in order to entice more and more
people
 to become
teachers
.
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 the matter another way, students mischievous
behaviors
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 are
also
 problems. Having to educate disobedient pupils can lead to anger and discouragement.
Teachers
 may feel depressed and start to leave
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 jobs . The resolution will come from parents who must teach their children to behave properly. The
last
 concern is that educators have
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 excessive workload. After finishing school, they have to prepare for the
next
 lesson. That means they have to spend their own relaxing time working. The majority of
teachers
 is snowed under with working and paperwork to meet the deadline, which
dishearten
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 them. The way forward is to hire more teaching assistants, cut down on teaching hours at school and lengthen
teachers
’ break time without subtracting their salaries. In a nutshell, education is the key to success in which the educators play an important role.
However
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 our society now has a
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decrease
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 number of
people
 having
desire
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 to become
teachers
 due to low income, learners’ bad
behavior
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 and unreasonable working hours. I firmly believe that once the problems are solved they will be more
people
 who want to work as a teacher
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