Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.
Nowadays,
people
explore more. They love to travel
to new different places
even though the
life is Correct article usage
apply
diificult
at some Correct your spelling
difficult
places
. In this
essay, I will discuss about
the merits and demerits of travelling to these difficult Remove the preposition
apply
places
.
The first
and the most important thing which the person travel
is for scientific purpose. They try to survey what natural assests
can be found which can be beneficial for Correct your spelling
assets
human
race in future. Add an article
the human
For instance
, in desert
Add an article
the desert
a desert
area
some natural blessings Add a comma
,area
such
as crude oil and gold has
been found which has made countries like Change the verb form
have
kuwait
and Saudi Arabia very wealthy nation. Change the capitalization
Kuwait
In addition
, people
who like to go to these places
for fun they collect life time
memory from there. Correct your spelling
lifetime
For example
, when an individual travel
to Antarctica or Arctic continents they tend to get Remove the article
journey
trip
experience
of living in Add an article
the experience
an experience
igloo
.
Add an article
an igloo
On the other hand
, despite the upsides of this
trajectory, the drawback cannot be undermined. Firstly
, when you go to cold continents like Antarctica, where the oxygen level is very low, few people
will find it difficult in breathing which will be very bad for their health. Secondly
, in desert
where the Add an article
the desert
a desert
tempreature
is very high, you will find it very difficult to find proper appropriate water for drinking. Correct your spelling
temperature
Moreover
, in these worst Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
condition
you have to encounter Add a comma
,condition
with
various wild animals and you need a lot of money to survive Change preposition
apply
at
these areas.
To conclude, human beings who are willing to Change preposition
in
travel
should have proper research and knowledge about these nations through internet
and social media and inquire from Correct article usage
the internet
people
who had been there. So, they face less
problems while travelling .Change the quantifier
fewer
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...