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more and more concerned as the evidence of climate change attributed to a drastic rise in greenhouse gases emission, which one of the main causes is burning fossil
fuel
to serve the need of
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of
cars
. As the effort to reduce the anthropogenic, it may be a promising strategy to increase the
cost
of
fuel
. As being a car user, I absolutely dismiss
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this
plan according to the following reasons, and
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essay will purpose
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better alternative solutions for amelioration.
First
of all, the drawbacks of augmentation in
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of
fuel
is escalating the
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. Due to increased daily payment,
people
try to save their money,
instead
of spending it
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accessories,
foods, or new clothes. As the result, the
, stores, and niches markets face
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difficulty to make an income.
Secondly
, depression can be an impact of the high
fuel
cost
. When citizens can not afford
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the expensive
fuel
price, they need to sell their
cars
because they do not have enough money for paying.
Therefore
, a surge in
fuel
cost
can bring about
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adversity.
There are solutions, which are more effective than increased
fuel
's
cost
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of
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friendly, and can improve the well-being too.
Firstly
, in order to reduce
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amount of harmful gases released from tremendous
cars
,
governmentAdd an article
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should give priority to improving the
of
cars
, which should be eco friendly.
For example
, the electricity
cars
, without releasing Carbon dioxide should be promoted and sold
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cheaper price than
fuel
consuming
cars
to lure
people
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.
Secondly
, public transport should be developed to be more convenient and more comfortable.
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people
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it
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and reduce to
use
the private
cars
,
the disastrous gases will be definitely decreased.
In summary,
although
imposing
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gasoline can reduce the
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, it is not the best method because it contributes to the economic
, and being stressed among
people
.
Moreover
, there are more promising strategies compared to increasing gasoline prices
such
as
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cars
, and developing public transport.