Whether or not the investment should be given to the new transportation one is an issue of interest. While some believe that the government should invest in new pathways of trains, others argue that the old public transport needs to be well-developed rather than the aforementioned one.
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behind the two contrasting views and reaches my own conclusion that both
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and letter should be taken into consideration.
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hand, it is undeniable that the majority of people always commute by
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train due to both cost-effectiveness and how rapidly it provides.
As a result
, new pathways were enhanced in order to serve the exceeding used.
Moreover
, the impacts of
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on the environment are less severe than those of automobiles.
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, trains not emitted significant
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of carbon dioxide, leading to traffic congestion, as well as those
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on roads.
On the other hand
, Improvement of remaining transportation should be prioritized
first
.
This
is due to the fact that not only the environmental issues but the poor health conditions
also
presented are far more necessary to be ignored.
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,
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long-term pollution has brought about
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traffic congestion which led to several problems to airway disorder and
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itself.
Additionally
, the investment in old ones is a permanent way to solve problems on the spot.
In conclusion,
although
the new projects of railways line of fast train can provide many benefits to people, to deal with the existing public transport can
also
be the perfect solution to both environmental and healthcare issues as well. The government should
therefore
enhance the old ones as well as expanding the new route of trains so that it will lead to enduring solutions.