In many families today, both parents work. Are there more advantages when a mother works than disadvantages?

Due to the rising cost of living,

both

the husband and the wife work in many families. Working

parents

are not able to spend enough time with their

children

. In my opinion, the disadvantages of

this

development far exceed the advantages.

To begin

with, when

both

partners continue to work after marriage, they can have financial stability in their

family

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. Indeed, they will be able to fulfil all the needs of the

children

. Most couples in China,

for example

, continue working after marriage and provide quality life, especially quality education, to their

children

.

Moreover

,

parents

can purchase properties and save an enormous amount of money for their child’s future.

Therefore

,

both

parents

can rest assured that financial prospects for their family will be better.

On the other hand

, if

both

parents

are working, they will have to leave their young child with guardians or childcare centres.

As a result

,

mothers

will not learn about their child’s habits and behaviour.

For instance

,

children

mostly learn bad habits when they are not under the supervision of their

parents

.

Consequently

, they might continue to follow the bad habits, and

mothers

will not be aware of them.

Hence

, it is essential for

mothers

to be around their

children

to monitor their behaviour / behavioural patterns closely. In conclusion,

this

essay argued that

although

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mother

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can contribute financially to their family, they are better off looking after their

children

.

Thus

, the disadvantages of working

mothers

greatly outweigh the advantages.

Also

,

mothers

who are always around

children

can ensure that they are raised with the necessary attention and care.