People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
It is true that the consumption of sweetened
drinks
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this
tendency is formed and suggest some vialbe
solutions before coming to a reasonable conclusion.
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To begin
with, sugary drinks
are widely consumed by people in modern life due to a massive marketing campaigns
. The manufacturers throw their many around by advertising their soft Correct the article-noun agreement
massive marketing campaigns
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drinks
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media
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celeberites
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celebrities
As a result
, sweetened drink companies step by step are
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habits
In addition
, the affordable price of high sugar beverages is another reason to make their sales significantly grow all over the world. Forcus
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drinks
cost just a penny and are sold everywhere. For instance
, soft drinks
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the fast-food
customer
spending money for buying combo or package meals.
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concerns
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heavier
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a heavier
frizzy
drink companies. Correct your spelling
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measure will affect directly on
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bussiness
and low down the number of their productions to soft drink markets. Correct your spelling
business
This
solution has been done susscessfully
in some countries like France or Singapore Correct your spelling
successfully
then
the number of consumming
sugary beverages have reduced 30% in 2020 compared to 2010. Correct your spelling
consuming
In addition
, the promotion of soft drinks
to the public should be restricted especially to young individuals or children. For example
, Coca cola
, Sprite or other frizzy beverages’ advertisements on cartoon Add a hyphen
Coca-cola
network
or educational channels in Vietnam have been prohibited since 2019.
In conclusion, despite the strong development of high sugar beverages manufacturers in Fix the agreement mistake
networks
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life, effective solutions can be considered to reverse Correct your spelling
modern
this
trend. It is predicted that more and more people will realize negative
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and consume carefully
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