Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Many
people
find themselves in
situations
where they must either accept what
life
has given them or find a way to move up in the world. In my opinion,
although
accepting your
situation
in
life
may be pragmatic in some cases, it is still better to at least strive to improve your
situation
as it can usually be bettered to some degree. On the one hand, the vast majority of
people
are unable to drastically change their
situation
and acceptance of
this
fact will make them feel more satisfied with their
lives
. The best example of
this
would be those
people
living in dire economic conditions. Recent research puts the Democratic Republic of Congo as one of the poorest nations on Earth, both due to a lack of developed infrastructure and internal strife in recent years. For a person living in a small village, ravaged by
war
or famine, it would be cruel to suggest that they should find a way to improve their
lives
when it might simply be impossible.
Instead
,
such
people
may feel they are better off accepting that they cannot make any changes to their
situation
at the present moment and just focus on their own survival and that of their family. These
situations
are rare but do exist around the world in various countries, particularly if they are at
war
or experiencing a severe economic downturn.
On the other hand
, few would dispute the fact that in even the most difficult
situations
people
can make their
lives
better through continued effort. Instances of
people
who worked hard and became successful abound in both developed and developing nations. Some relevant examples of
this
are the postwar
situations
of countries like Germany, Japan, and South Korea.
Also
, All those countries were devastated by
war
to greater and lesser degrees yet they are all currently economic powerhouses. In Japan, World
War
2 left their population depleted of workers,
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deep national debt due to reparations and infrastructure reduced to rubble. By not accepting their
situation
they were able to become leaders in technology through notable companies like Sony, Nokia and Toyota. The efficacy of the individuals who had to work hard to improve their
lives
is reflected in the overall progress of the country and should serve as an example to all
war
-torn nations. To conclude, there are very few
situations
where it would be advisable to simply accept an unhappy
situation
because hard work over a long period will pay off to some degree in the vast majority of cases. By having a more positive attitude it is
also
more likely that your efforts to make a better
life
will be rewarded, while a more defeatist attitude is likely to reduce your chances to make changes in
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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