There are many wild birds and animals living in the cities, and some people believe that these animals should be killed, while others think that they should be saved and protected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are opposing views about protecting or killing wild

animals

and

birds

which lives or commute in the

cities

. As far as I am concerned, protecting

animals

,especially, wild ones will assist to secure the earth. According to one group’s view that advocates

cities

’ wildlife killing, these

kind

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of mammals and woodsy fowls are dangerous for the people particularly the kids. They believe that the wild

animals

attack

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every individual they see, especially, when they are starving.

Moreover

, they believe that these

kind

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of huge mammals and wild

birds

are harmful

for

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cities

’ facilities

such

as dumpsters, plants in the yards and hedges.

For example

, once they are hungry, they watch at any dumpster as a buffet and damage them to feed themselves.

However

, I share the opinion which thinks

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of creatures should be protected. According to

this

perspective, the

animals

and the

birds

possess priority to live in the region due to they are living there far before

the

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human being started to build their

cities

.

Thus

, we must respect

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their lives and try to have a peaceful life beside them. To achieve

this

goal, there are some provincial rules to protect

the

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wild

animals

and

birds

from human’s harassment and vice versa.

For instance

, there is a province’s ‘Bear Wise Rules’ in Ontario which following that will help us stay safe from the bears ,and ,

also

, not hurting them.

Furthermore

,

animals

’ conservation will ,eventually, assist

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the earth protection.

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in point is once there are wolves in a territory where deer live (as we know many kinds of deer live beside and even inside the Canadian

cities

), the number of deer

are

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stable via wolves feed

from

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some of them. So, the plants have an adequate condition to grow and remain because of

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feed volume

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;

therefore

, the land of that region have a fit environment that leads to appropriate weather for that neck of the woods. In conclusion, while, there are some dangers and detriments because of the wild

animals

and

birds

roaming in the

cities

, they have intense benefits for our life’s situation and the mother earth.

Therefore

, we all must do our best to make them safe.