There are many wild birds and animals living in the cities, and some people believe that these animals should be killed, while others think that they should be saved and protected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are opposing views about protecting or killing wild
animals
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and
birds
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which lives or commute in the
cities
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. As far as I am concerned, protecting
animals
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,especially, wild ones will assist to secure the earth. According to one group’s view that advocates
cities
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’ wildlife killing, these
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of mammals and woodsy fowls are dangerous for the people particularly the kids. They believe that the wild
animals
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attack
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every individual they see, especially, when they are starving.
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, they believe that these
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of huge mammals and wild
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are harmful
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cities
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’ facilities
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as dumpsters, plants in the yards and hedges.
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, once they are hungry, they watch at any dumpster as a buffet and damage them to feed themselves.
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, I share the opinion which thinks
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of creatures should be protected. According to
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perspective, the
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and the
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possess priority to live in the region due to they are living there far before
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human being started to build their
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.
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, we must respect
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their lives and try to have a peaceful life beside them. To achieve
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goal, there are some provincial rules to protect
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wild
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and
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from human’s harassment and vice versa.
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, there is a province’s ‘Bear Wise Rules’ in Ontario which following that will help us stay safe from the bears ,and ,
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, not hurting them.
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,
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’ conservation will ,eventually, assist
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the earth protection.
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in point is once there are wolves in a territory where deer live (as we know many kinds of deer live beside and even inside the Canadian
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), the number of deer
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stable via wolves feed
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some of them. So, the plants have an adequate condition to grow and remain because of
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feed volume
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them
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;
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, the land of that region have a fit environment that leads to appropriate weather for that neck of the woods. In conclusion, while, there are some dangers and detriments because of the wild
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and
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roaming in the
cities
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, they have intense benefits for our life’s situation and the mother earth.
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, we all must do our best to make them safe.
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