You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Dana Smith and I have read your advert in the Melbourne Magazine announcing your need for someone to stay with your family and take care of your kid. I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in applying for

this

job. I am a university student studying specialising in child care and education major which is why I believe being responsible

of

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a kid will be beneficial for both of us; the kid and

I

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me

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.

In addition

to my area of studies, I am the eldest sister in my family,

therefore

, I took care of my siblings since I was young.

this

is why I am confident I will be the most suitable person for

this

job.

Also

, I will be staying in Melbourne for my End of term vacation, so I will be available to look after your child while you are at work or going out

at

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in

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evenings

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the evenings

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. As I am a jogger, I would like to spend my leisure time running around the neighbourhood while getting to explore different streets there and trying famous restaurants and pubs. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dana Smith