Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays many
students
are unable to focus on their studies. The two main reasons for
this
problem are they find
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in following the lectures and distracted
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other
students
, but
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solutions
like asking teachers to repeat important points and staying away from
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distracting
people will help them to regain their attention.
Firstly
,
students
always find
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to follow speed lectures, because
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teachers have to cover
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portion of
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. While
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children
eventually lose their focus and they
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have
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.
For example
, some schools in Canada conducts the exams
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every two months, so lecturers have to cover quarte
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, in that rush they will teach very quickly at some time
students
find it hard to know what they are learning. Another cause is,
students
often get distracted from other
children
in the class,
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very regularly where they lose concentration at some point.
On the other hand
, there are two solutions for
this
problem. one after every class teacher should give a brief summary
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the discussed topics and while listening
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important topics
students
should sit in
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till the topic
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completes
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conducting
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a conclusion section
students
can
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the missed lecture again and can solve their doubts if they have any. Another solution is, by changing his or her seat place while any important lesson is going
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their fellow mates. In conclusion,
children
can lose
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focus
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classes immediately if they feel hard to understand the lecture and disturbance from other
children
, but
by
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reviewing the
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teaching
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teached
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lessons and small seat changes can possibly solve these problems.
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