Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most countries are faced with one issue or the other, some of these problems are the demography of the
country
, education system of the nation as well. On
this
note, my
country
will
also
be faced with some challenges in the
next
decade if the present issues are not taken care of appropriately.
Firstly
, My
country
is a democratic
country
where the governance is decided by the people depending on the interest of the people. In the nearest future, I predict a political
problem
which in essence will affect the economy of the
country
.
For example
, If the people elect an inefficient political candidate
as a result
of a great campaign by the political candidate,
this
will affect the
country
negatively for the period of that governance, which will eventually tell in the
next
ten years.
This
could lead to inflation in the exchange rate, a high rate of unemployment and many more. A sustainable way to avoid these problems later
,
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is to ensure an efficient government is elected and
this
can be carefully done by looking at past records of the political candidate as guidance.
Furthermore
, with the current rate of the unstable education system in the
country
, the value of education given to students at every level has become shallow, which in the
next
decade, will result in the employment of an unintelligent set of graduates.
For instance
, at the tertiary level, the syllabus currently used for most courses are outdated
,
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and do not fit into the practical area of
such
course, thereby giving the student difficulties in applying whatever has been taught in the institution on the field (workplace).
Also
, from my experience, I observed that most of the knowledge needed in the field are the high reasoning intellectuals, not just only the theoretical knowledge.
Therefore
, to solve the present
problem
and avoid it in the
next
decade, It is advised that the syllabus used in institutions be updated, as so many innovations and knowledge are added to the field.
This
will help the graduates remain relevant in the economy.
In addition
, the increase in non-renewable
resources
pollution in the
country
cannot be ignored, and
this
will definitely be a
problem
in less than ten years if not resolved as soon as possible. In view of the fact that these non-renewable
resources
such
as fossils, plastics, rubber, fuels, are not properly disposed
off
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, and causes blockage in drainages, which result in flooding and leads to bad roads. The ecosystem is affected in one way or the other as it operates in a chain. It is important that manufacturers conceive a means of using renewable
resources
for manufacturing,
this
will help solve the
problem
of non-renewable
resources
pollution and escape the
problem
in the future. In conclusion, every
country
is affected by one
problem
or the other.
Nevertheless
, what is ,more important is how they are resolved now.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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