Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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dis-advantages

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over preserving and non-preserving the

animals

in the Zoos. The options to keep the

animals

in Zoos follow some crucial points to be considered. The

animals

are protected by vaccinating them regularly and having their health monitored with the latest scientific health care methodologies.

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keeps the

animals

away

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the viruses as well from the other contaminated diseases. The

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point I would like to bring up is they will be given organic meat/food.

This

gives them a proper diet and sufficient vitamins, proteins

to

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their body. The ternary part I want to highlight is they are protected from

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and sudden climate changes.

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, in Amazon

forests

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many

animals

are moved

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one place to another in search of food due to the environment changes and devasting the forests. Due to

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the

animals

die for lack of food plus loss of energy while boarding to

another places

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. There is one known advantage

also

in having the

animals

in zoos.

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makes

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economic growth by allowing people to pay and see the

animals

.

For example

, the Safari ride in Toronto

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is an open forest for the

animals

to live on their own. There are few valid points to be taken into consideration for the

animals

to be free. The importance of

this

is to it has good physical, mental health in balance by hunting their own prey and keeping their skills up to the mark.

Moreover

, the

animals

will not feel they are in prison.

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, in

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survey

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many

animals

expire when their freedom

is grasp

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. As per my understanding and some research, I would refer

animals

stay at Zoo will be the better option.