Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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dis-advantages

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over preserving and non-preserving the

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in the Zoos. The options to keep the

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in Zoos follow some crucial points to be considered. The

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are protected by vaccinating them regularly and having their health monitored with the latest scientific health care methodologies.

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keeps the

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away

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the viruses as well from the other contaminated diseases. The

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point I would like to bring up is they will be given organic meat/food.

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gives them a proper diet and sufficient vitamins, proteins

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their body. The ternary part I want to highlight is they are protected from

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and sudden climate changes.

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many

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are moved

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one place to another in search of food due to the environment changes and devasting the forests. Due to

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the

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die for lack of food plus loss of energy while boarding to

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. There is one known advantage

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in having the

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in zoos.

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makes

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economic growth by allowing people to pay and see the

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.

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, the Safari ride in Toronto

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is an open forest for the

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to live on their own. There are few valid points to be taken into consideration for the

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to be free. The importance of

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is to it has good physical, mental health in balance by hunting their own prey and keeping their skills up to the mark.

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, the

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will not feel they are in prison.

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survey

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many

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expire when their freedom

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. As per my understanding and some research, I would refer

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stay at Zoo will be the better option.