My name is Thu Hien. I am a highschool student. So most of my day is spent studying. My daily work is also quite simple. Currently, due to the complicated situation of the Covid-19 epidemic, we have to distance learning

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My name is Thu Hien. I am a high school student. So most of my day is spent studying. My daily work is
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quite simple. Currently, due to the complicated situation of the Covid-19 epidemic, we ought to distance learning.
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, the amount of daily homework has increased significantly. I regularly spend 30 minutes a day in order to do exercise and have breakfast. Immediately after, I do homework, natural subjects
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as math, chemistry for a whole time. For me, morning is the optimal time to study since my brain will function optimally. Apart from that, I have a craving for learning something brand new
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summer. Right after looking for it, I discovered playing the guitar which really hits the pot! It takes me 2 hours a day to study. The rest of the time I read books and give my mom a hand with housework.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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