Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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recent years, there has been
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shift in social networking trends. There is
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change in our younger generation thinking pattern.They prefer spending more time on social media than with friends for
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. ,While there could be various reasons for it but some of
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of sitting at home, efforts in getting ready and travelling time. If
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psychological
problems. Human by nature needs physical healing which cannot be exchanged via online meeting. We should seriously brainstorm about remedial actions to motivate them to prefer going out to public places to engage with friends.
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behind it and correlate that factor by incentivising the child.
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out of the house as they
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travelling. Now we can propose sponsoring them a lunch meal of
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their
choice or coupon for
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their
favourite movie.
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in making a trip and get rewarded. Another possible way could be associating them with
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activities. We can
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get together at some stadium or sports centre which will induce some energy.
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it would be worthy to bring them out of
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strategy and planning, we can assist our youth in breaking the glass ceiling and re-introduce
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them to the real world of
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humanising
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with each other.
This
will help to make our universe a better place to live by helping each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socialization
  • curate
  • engaging
  • social anxiety
  • digital detox
  • tech-free zones
  • mentorship programs
  • real-world interactions
  • face-to-face settings
  • in-person participation
  • promote
  • deter
  • foster
  • appeal
  • perspectives
  • detox challenges
  • community service
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