In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?

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Wildlife protection has been one of the major concerns of many nations. Over the
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few years, more and more
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are becoming extinct.
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phenomenon is adversely affecting the environment. The following paragraphs will analyze the reasons for
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issue and suggest remedial measures.
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extinction is a natural process, the rate at which it is happening now is not. Over 26,500 species are estimated to be at risk of extinction. There are many factors driving biodiversity loss.
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and foremost, illegal human activities like illegal fishery, illegal hunting and poaching pose a threat to endangered
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. Some people hunt, kill and catch
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to get financial benefits. Others,
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, do it for entertainment purposes. The
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group of factors are related to human habitation. People, trying to improve the infrastructure, build new roads, destroy forests, etc.
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,
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' natural habitat becomes destructed which in turn leads to degradation of the quality of their lives.
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, thousands of elephants are dying each year in South Africa as the population grows. In terms of solutions, governments are largely responsible. Illegal activities leading to wildlife decline should have harsher punishment.
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, government representatives can post more guards in preservation areas to deter poaching.
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, special campaigns can be organized to increase the population of endangered species.
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, breeding. To conclude, if special measures are not taken to protect
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and plants the speed of extinction will only escalate. I believe that governments have a crucial role to play to ensure nature for future generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • urbanization
  • deforestation
  • agricultural expansion
  • pollution control
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable practices
  • overexploitation
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • quarantine measures
  • eradication programs
  • public awareness campaigns
  • habitat destruction
  • climate change
  • natural habitats
  • species decline
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