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Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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An independent
society
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 does not suffer any kind of restrictions on
speech
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,
on
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religion or on caste. In my opinion, as
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right
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the right
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 to
freedom
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 of
speech
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 assist
people
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 in expressing their views and
opinions
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 without any fear,
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, the same forms an integral part of a free nation. In the forthcoming paragraphs,
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 essay will delve deep into the arguments supporting my views on
freedom
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 of
speech
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 being pivot to independent
society
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. With the
independency
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independence
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 of expressing views, citizens of a country are able to discuss their agreements and disagreements for any decision. As in any country
wherein
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people
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 are encouraged and are provided with an open platform to showcase their
opinions
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 regarding the different policies or acts of the government,
people
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 tend to enjoy more
freedom
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 than a country having
restricted
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 policy for
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right
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 to
speech
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.
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, it is with the help of
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right
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 only that
people
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 are able to speak against anything which goes wrong against their interest and
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, maintains
freedom
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 of choice in a nation.
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, as in these nations, no policies can be just imposed on
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 and
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, it assists in maintaining complete
freedom
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 in a
society
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.
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,
movement
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movements
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 like ‘Black lives
matter’
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matter
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 in the United States and ‘Farmers Protest’ in India are
great
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example
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 of
freedom
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 of
speech
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, wherein
people
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 have come out to express their disappointments. Ergo, in my view, no
society
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 can be said an independent one unless its
people
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 are conferred with the
right
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 to
speech
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.
Freedom
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to
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speech
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 acts as a primary source to eradicate
oppression
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 from
a
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society
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 and
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, building a free nation. There are many countries in the world, which does not provide the
right
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 to
feely
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freely
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 disseminate news by the media and exempts them from the basic
right
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 to
speech
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.
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 countries majorly operate under dictatorship and citizens of these countries do not have the
right
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 to speak against the government policies and
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 suffers from
oppression
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. Had
public
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 been given
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to speak out and give their
opinions
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,
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oppression
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 by these governments would not sustain.
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, in my opinion,
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right
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 to
speech
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 is a basic ingredient for a
society
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 to be free from any kind of
oppression
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. In conclusion,
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right
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 to
freedom
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 of
speech
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 gives a platform to
people
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 to express their
opinions
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 and raise their voice against
oppressions
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oppression
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,
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, any
society
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 without these basic rights to
their
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its
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 citizens cannot be said to be a free
society
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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