Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, tech) .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the past few decades, there has been a paradigm shift in the decision making of the younger generation. With technology advancement and other social media applications , they are getting wrongly influenced by high society glamour and end up spending time and money to be like them. In

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essay, I will discuss how fashion trends are influencing our youth which is not constructive for their future. Notwithstanding , youth should have a

lazor

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razor

-sharp focus on their studies to secure

a better jobs

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better jobs

a better job

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and earn well. While they can always have some time to unwinding and rejuvenate themselves by engaging in music and other fun activities. But unfortunately, teenagers prefer to

hooked

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hook

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onto celebrities ,

for example

,

k-pop

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in k-pop

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most of the girls follows them on social media and

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spend hours following their lifestyle and fashion. They find their life so fascinating and feels that studies are not so important and start imagining life like them Another issue is there are so many hi-tech gadgets available in the market which they may not need but looking at misleading ads kids get attracted towards it and force their parents to buy it. They can

also

go to the extent of using

thier

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their

pocket money to acquire it. In a nutshell, I believe we should provide an inducive environment and proper guidance to teenagers in helping them to make

a better and wiser decisions

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better and wiser decisions

a better and wiser decision

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when it comes to buying only what is useful for them. ,

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they should remain focus on creating a strong foundation for their career.