There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

One of the major reasons for global warming is man-made activities.

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are cutting

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and producing

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dioxide

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. To solve these problems, humans have to

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things

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that are not harmful to the environment.

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for

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problem.

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, people cut

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to make papers and houses. Cutting

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will make the pollution bad

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because

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can incorporate

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dioxide

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and produce oxygen. If

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does not happen the pollution and global warming will stop.

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, producing

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dioxide

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is another reason. Humans

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cars

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and burn garbage and plastics. They cut

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, so plants cannot incorporate carbons and

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causes

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the world’s temperature to rise. To solve

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problem people should not cut

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and produce

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dioxide

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is difficult. Due to

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that do not harm the environment and are useful in life.

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, papers can be made from stones. It is waterproof and not easily ripped. If everyone starts to

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paper made from stones, the environment does not have to be damaged and is very useful in daily life. The solution for

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carbon

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dioxide

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has two

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electric

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when travelling. Electric

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do not produce

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dioxide

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there are no problems with using oil. It moves by batteries.

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, stop wasting too much trash. Plastics can be reused and other

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can be

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reused.

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, donate clothes, toys and books to children who are living in developing countries. It is better to

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than burnt and

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high temperature. In conclusion, the main two

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of temperature rising are damaging plants and producing

carbon

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dioxide

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.

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,

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can be solved by making papers from stones, using electric

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and recycling trash.