In some countries, the government pays unemployed people on a weekly basis. How this would impact people as well as government? Do you agree or disagree with that?

In recent years, there is an ongoing debate whether the
government
should or should not support unemployed
people
.
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it will be carefully examined to support my opinion. I tend to disagree
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those who are privileged to receive help from the
government
authorities.
Firstly
, in today's world of high technology. With the presence of social media,
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for any individual to earn is widely open. In
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would certainly disagree agree with the
government
's policy to help those
people
. The priority should be given to disabled
people
or retired folks. More funds to those who are in need.
Thus
this
will help them to live a decent living without any worries.
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forming laziness among younger generations for not putting any effort to get a job.
For example
, students may not
further
their high educations as the future has been secured
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.
This
will influence
people
to spend money freely as it is given for free. It will indirectly affect the growth of the nation. Many sectors will be affected mainly education industries. It will provide a negative impact on the economy which will degrade the progress of the nation. In conclusion, there are more negative impacts on the growth of the country and the
people
if the
government
continues paying the unemployed. Younger generations are the backbone of the country's future.
Instead
of funding the unemployed, the
government
should give more job opportunities for all graduates and support to the youth of the nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment benefits
  • financial support
  • basic standard of living
  • essential needs
  • economic stability
  • job seeking
  • government expenditure
  • reallocation of funds
  • dependency culture
  • consumer spending
  • income inequality
  • safety net
  • public resources
  • workforce productivity
  • substantial resources
  • social equity
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