Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, education has become one of the highest priorities of the parents for their children, as education can create better careers for children in the future.

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, some people criticized that the

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taught in primary, secondary, high school until university level focus only on learning facts,

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of learning practical

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. According to my personal opinion,

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have set a

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to balance the practical and theoretical

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and theoretical subjects cannot be replaced by practical

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.

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, I believe

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focus not only on theoretical but

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on practical

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off,

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have set a standard

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to provide the

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with equalized

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between theoretical and practical

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. To exemplify, the

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in

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are provided with extracurricular subjects. The

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may learn many practical

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in extracurricular activities. With

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standard

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provided by

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, the

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may learn both theoretical and practical

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.

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, the

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can learn soft

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that are not taught in the classroom.

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, in

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theoretical

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is the basic

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that must be possessed before apply it in practice.

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the

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have to master the theoretical

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of the materials and mechanism or steps before

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it in practice. Without the theoretical subjects,

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will not apply them in the right way.

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,

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need to learn theoretical

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before applying them in

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practical matters. In conclusion,

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have already created the best standard

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that fits the needs of

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and in

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students

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need to learn basic theoretical

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before applying it in practice.

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, I am of the opinion that

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have set

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based on the

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’ needs.