Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, education has become one of the highest priorities of the parents for their children, as education can create better careers for children in the future.

However

, some people criticized that the

curriculum

taught in primary, secondary, high school until university level focus only on learning facts,

instead

of learning practical

skills

. According to my personal opinion,

schools

have set a

curriculum

to balance the practical and theoretical

skills

and theoretical subjects cannot be replaced by practical

skills

.

Thus

, I believe

schools

focus not only on theoretical but

also

on practical

skills

.

First

off,

schools

have set a standard

curriculum

to provide the

students

with equalized

skills

between theoretical and practical

skills

. To exemplify, the

students

in

schools

are provided with extracurricular subjects. The

students

may learn many practical

skills

in extracurricular activities. With

this

standard

curriculum

provided by

schools

, the

students

may learn both theoretical and practical

skills

.

Thus

, the

students

can learn soft

skills

that are not taught in the classroom.

Secondly

, in

fact

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theoretical

knowledge

is the basic

knowledge

that must be possessed before apply it in practice.

For example

, in patisserie

faculty

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the

students

have to master the theoretical

knowledge

of the materials and mechanism or steps before

apply

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it in practice. Without the theoretical subjects,

students

will not apply them in the right way.

Hence

,

students

need to learn theoretical

skills

before applying them in

a

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practical matters. In conclusion,

schools

have already created the best standard

curriculum

that fits the needs of

students

and in

fact

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students

need to learn basic theoretical

knowledge

before applying it in practice.

Thus

, I am of the opinion that

schools

have set

curriculum

based on the

students

’ needs.