Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are advantages and disadvantages of a family run business.

People reckon that, if you want success in the
business
world, you should
work
with your family but there are some benefits and drawbacks of the family-run
business
. In
this
essay, we discuss both pros and cons.
Firstly
, one of the biggest advantages of a family's
business
is their loyalty and integrity. They are
a
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family
members
so they are honest and loyal with their
work
.
For example
,
generally
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,generally
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people are not loyal to the
company
if a
company
is
in
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loss they resign and join another
company
but family
members
stay together in all ups and downs.
Secondly
, they devote all their strength and time to thrive their
company
.
For Example
, employees
work
according to the time duration,
however
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members
of the family
work
harder without a time limit.
On the other hand
, one of the drawbacks is, youth want to prove themselves and they have no interest in their family's
business
so it becomes a burden for them.
For instance
, in
this
modern era, youth want something new in their life. They have their own vision for the life and parents pressure them to join their
business
so they become frustrating about
this
control freak attitude and sometimes it
cause
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their
business
and relationships.
Moreover
, some
members
of the family are greedy and they want whole control in the
business
and that makes things complicated in the relationship and
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business
suffer most in those situations because no one takes
order
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from anyone . In conclusion, there are some drawbacks,
however
, I still believe working in the family
business
is more beneficial for a
company
or for your family
also
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • loyalty
  • trust
  • communication
  • generational knowledge
  • long-term outlook
  • family traditions
  • stability
  • cost-effective
  • flexible payment arrangements
  • conflict
  • tensions
  • roles
  • diversity
  • external perspectives
  • innovation
  • adaptation
  • succession planning
  • instability
  • leadership
  • ownership
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