Some people believe that teenagers should study all school subjects while others claim that they should focus on the subjects they are best at or that they are interested in. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about the curriculum for youngsters and teenagers in schools to study. Some argue that students should continue only studying their

favorite

Change the spelling

favourite

show examples

subject

Use synonyms

, while others counter it with a statement, they should study all the

subjects

Use synonyms

. There are a number

reasons

Change preposition

of reasons

show examples

why people follow

theirs

Correct the word

their

show examples

notion with heavy reasoning by their sides.

Firstly

Linking Words

, if a

student

Use synonyms

puts more

efforts

Fix the agreement mistake

effort

show examples

only

in

Change preposition

into

show examples

the

subjects

Use synonyms

he

/

Use synonyms

she likes, by doing so, the

student

Use synonyms

gets more time to concentrate and

right

Add an article

the right

show examples

temperament to learn things quickly.

In addition

Linking Words

to

this

Linking Words

, an individual must do what he loves,

this

Linking Words

brings a lot more

effeciency

Correct your spelling

efficiency

and productivity while studying, which in turn yields

a

Correct the article-noun agreement

apply

show examples

positive results like good grades and academic excellence. The

student

Use synonyms

can be considered clear and focused

for

Change preposition

on

show examples

achieving goals in his

/

Use synonyms

her life.

Linking Words

However

Add a comma

,However

show examples

this

Linking Words

achievement can come with a cost. The

student

Use synonyms

will miss out

the

Change preposition

on the

show examples

other opportunities which he

/

Use synonyms

she could never have discovered, the life of a

student

Use synonyms

will become quite monotonous and witness

comparitively

Correct your spelling

comparatively

less development, socially as well as academically.

Secondly

Linking Words

, people support the idea of

curriculum

Add an article

the curriculum

a curriculum

show examples

which ensures a

student

Use synonyms

to undertake all the

subject

Use synonyms

, believe that if a

student

Use synonyms

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

to learn most of the things and not stick to one

subject

Use synonyms

at

such

Linking Words

a developing age like adolescence.

For instance

Linking Words

, Plato, his area of expertise was not only limited to philosophy

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

but

also

Linking Words

in mathematics, politics, science and biology witnessed a colossal amount of contributions. To make a point,

such

Linking Words

ideas

needs

Change the verb form

need

show examples

to be cultivated in the growing years of the

student

Use synonyms

. These ideas are

Add an article

an example

show examples

example

Fix the agreement mistake

examples

show examples

of ambivalent students with broad horizons. For overall development at

such

Linking Words

budding age, students need to cultivate

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

all other sorts of knowledge that they gain from other

subjects

Use synonyms

.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, the

student

Use synonyms

could end up being "jack of all, and master of none" if he

/

Use synonyms

she fails to choose

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

one

subject

Use synonyms

and

unable

Add a missing verb

is unable

show examples

to do it attentively. In conclusion, I believe that schools must ensure the

student

Use synonyms

studies all the

subject

Use synonyms

, to make sure the

student

Use synonyms

develops as a person holistically. I think

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

the disadvantages of studying all the

subjects

Use synonyms

outweighs

Change the verb form

outweigh

show examples

the one in which a

student

Use synonyms

wishes to study only his choice of

subjects

Use synonyms

.