Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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environment. It is
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community and how outside kids
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in local senior citizen care
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will help them to know the old generation bonding. It will
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help them in future why it will mandatory to take care
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governments
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budgets towards the
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expenditure
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service. To summarise the above discussion points it is always must and need for
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nation with more values.
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