Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these to aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about how a country can be economically and environmentally

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some believe that it would be impossible for the countries to be successful in terms of financial and environmental

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the inconsistency between these terms, I would argue with those who claim

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. On the one hand, there are several reasons why those proponents point out that it is feasible for a country to be a prospect in both environmental and financial topics. One reason is that,

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these days most

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the

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countries have

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undergone a lot of pressure

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if their governments enacted some green rules, all businesses would follow them, resulting in they will have a green supply chain.

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green supply chain not only leads to companies

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green products but

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help

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them to decrease their environmental

pollutions

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pollution

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. The more green rules, the more flourishing

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, it seems to me that in our competitive world companies are

inevitable

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competing with others in producing goods.

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may lead to a significant increase in the total rate of production, resulting in an increased production of greenhouse gases. Examples of

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approach can be seen in China, which has the highest rate of production in both financial profits and greenhouse gases.

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, having a clean environment needs a great deal of attention from governments, which

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businesses to supply more green infrastructures. These infrastructures are costlier for them, resulting in they should probably increase the final prices of goods.

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, people will less tend to buy, and

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, they will have less profit. In conclusion,

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environmental issues is important, countries can not focus on both

economical

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and environmental aspects because inconsistency would exist between them.