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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Music
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 has played a pivotal role throughout our history.
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, there are mixed opinions about its significance, as many believe it to be a boon for humankind, while others consider it as a curse. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and give my personal opinion on the subject matter.
Firstly
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, I will explain how
music
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 has helped in
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 of our society and
secondly
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, I will write down the negative influences of the same. As the saying goes, "
Music
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 is universal, as it transcends all the cultural and linguistic barriers".
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,
music
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 has played a significant role in the unification of the world. Historically, it has influenced and ignited major revolutions and had been a catalyst for almost every social
reforms
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.
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, during the Indian independence movement, the songs penned down by revolutionaries
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 as Bhagat Singh and Ram Prasad Bismil, had a long-lasting impact on the youth irrespective of their cultural belonging, eventually contributing to fire-up the overall cause and saving the nation from the hands of tyranny.
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 to that,
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 is an essential part of medical science. It is used as a relaxation medium in therapy and,
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 during the treatment of multiple psychological
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Alzheimers
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, anxiety, panic attacks etc.
On the other hand
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, there are many negative impacts of
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 largely due to the success and fame it brings to the artists. Musical talents enjoy immense popularity and lead a luxurious lifestyle, often engaging in anti-social activities
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 as drug use and
alchoholism
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alcoholism
.
As a result
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 of
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, the large followers gained by these artists,
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 dream of a similar way of living like their ideals, resulting in a counter-culture attitude among the youth.
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 can be easily seen from the activities that took place in the 1960s in
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the USA
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 as a response to the Vietnam war and
Civil
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the Civil
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 rights movement. Musicians largely engaged in drugs and
alchohol
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alcohol
, inspired a generation of youth to lead a
care-free
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 lifestyle, eventually resulting in vandalism and damage to public properties. In conclusion, there may be many negative influences of
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 and
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its
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 use.
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, in my opinion, the positives outweigh the negatives and
music
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 should be promoted worldwide.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Harmony
  • Melody
  • Rhythm
  • Socio-cultural
  • Artistic expression
  • Cognitive development
  • Soundtrack
  • Moral implications
  • Acoustic ecology
  • Intellectual property
  • Authenticity
  • Commercialization
  • Media literacy
  • Sensory overload
  • Acculturation
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