In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. DO the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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According to the statistics, reading E-
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have been gaining more popularity in the past few years.
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has several pros and cons which will be discussed in
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which has been changed via electronic devices: there have been many transformations after launching
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smartphones
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all over the world.
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may be beneficial in many aspects.
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, the amount of wood production and
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timber cutting will be decreased drastically if people use electronic
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more than they used to.
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, they will be able to carry hundreds of
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at the same time without the smallest extra weight on their shoulders. So,
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kind of reading might be much more accessible where ever you are.
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, the risk of weakening our
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will increase tremendously by watching the screen for a long time.
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, literate people have to read and study too much that they need glasses sooner than the rest. In fact, reading and studying
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on the screens of mobile phones or laptops deteriorate the situation even more.
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, tablets and electronic
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devices need to be
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regularly, and
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the issue some people could not be
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, to read E-
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, you are required to use your phone which has many other applications that would be
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irresistible
to waste your time on them. Sometimes, I find it very hard to concentrate on the
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when I receive many notifications on my mobile. In conclusion,
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reading E-
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in comparison to the hard copies, have many superiorities, I, myself would prefer the old-fashioned way which is leafing through the pages of a
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. I am absolutely in love with picking the
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from the bookshelves , smelling it, skimming through it, and
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snuggling up the couch and start reading it.
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the pleasure I would not give up
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the technology.
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