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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#internet #newspapers
These days, it cannot be denied that
Internet
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 changes many ways of life. Some
people
 claim that
newspapaers
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newspapers
 are less popular and outdated due to the growth of
Internet
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. I strongly agree with
this
 statement for several reasons which will be discussed in
this
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Internet
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 has numerous benefits for
people
. The major
reasons
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reason
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 is that reading
news
 on
Internet
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 is more convenient.
People
 can access
to
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information in
real time
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. To explain,
Internet
 allow reporters to update the most recent information to
people
. Breaking
news
 on
websits
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websites
,
for example
, always update
ccurrent
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current
 situations up to date.
In contrast
, newspapers publish only one time of the day, mostly in the morning.
As a result
, they cannot interact with
people
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 as
Internet
news
 does. Another
reasons
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 is that
Internet
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 is eco-friendly. To produce
newpapers
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newspapers
, paper is required.
Therefore
, a number of trees are chopped down. Unfortunately, it
also
 becomes
waste
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 after one day pass. While reading
news
 on
Internet
,
people
 need only electronic devices,
such
 as a mobile phone and a laptop to reach information. According to the research conducted by Oxford University, a large amount of newspapers waste in London is
significant
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increasing
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 due to their costs and less popularity. In conclusion,
this
 essay
feel
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 totally agree with
this
 idea as
Internet
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 is more and more popular for
people
 while newspaper becomes less important.
This
 is because
Internet
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 is easily accessible and
environment
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the environment
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freindly
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friendly
.
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  • Access
  • Convenient
  • Fast
  • Expensive
  • Wider range
  • News sources
  • Perspectives
  • Readership
  • Demographics
  • Physical
  • Tangible
  • Reading experience
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