Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

These days, the number of various

animal

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species are decreasing. Some species are nearly endangered. and others are

also

in the same situation.

This

essay will discuss the major roots of

this

problem and some practical solutions. One of the main causes is that there are many

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illegal

trading of

animals

in the black market around the world.

This

is because the more exotic

animals

, the more expensive cost.

Consequently

, many hunters try to hunt endangered species for selling to

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rich buyers. In order to tackle

this

problem, governments should protect these

animals

from extinction.

For example

, they could do

this

by implementing a law to prevent these

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illegal

activities. Another obvious concern is that animal habitats are disrupted. To explain, people destroy

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for several reasons.

For example

, we cut down a number of trees to expand cities.

Although

it is important to economic growth, these activities have negative effects

to

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animals

. They lose their houses and

foods

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. One effective solution is for governments to control

man made

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constructions which not allow them to affect

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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.

For instance

,

this

could be done by setting high rate taxes.

Therefore

, the elimination of animal

habitat

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habitats

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would decline. In conclusion,

this

essay examines two issues leading to

the

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animal extinction; (1)

an

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illegal trading and (2)

a

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animal habitat disruption. As far as I am concern, I strongly believe that governments should play an important role to force a proper law and levy on constructions taxes to protect our

animals

in the future.