More and more serious crimes seem to be committed each year. Some think that the death penalty is the best way to deal with this problem while other people think different measures are more likely to be successful. Discuss both view and give your own opinions.

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rate has been increased at an alarming rate, a number of serious immoral deeds are noticed every year .In

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regard , an array of individuals opine that

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penalty is an ideal way to deal with offenders .

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, other posses that there are some different ways to mitigate

this

problem .

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essay will bring forth both the views

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my opinion which incline toward latter statement as these ways are best once . Initiating with the former

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, it is believed by some

people

death

punishment

is the best for those who commit serious crimes because they are habitual to doing

such

misdeeds they do not afraid

from

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small punishments and

continue

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indulge themselves

into

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such

activities

even after receiving their

first

punishment

.

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, it is generally seen that there

are

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number

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of

people

who commit

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a crime

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crime

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and get lifetime

punishment

of living in

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jail but do not stop their indulgence in

such

moral conducts because they have outside link Thereby , it is better to

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sentence

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to

death

rather than other punishments . On Contrary, there is another school of

thoughts

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which states that there are some other approaches as

people

turn themselves into

such

bad

activities

to earn large sums of money due to the lack of employment opportunities so,

government

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the government

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have to provide good job facilities to the youngsters and taught some skills to those who commit small crimes in their

first

punishment

so, they don't indulge into these unlawful

activities

.

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, a survey was conducted by the jail council in China noticed that near about 70%of

first

crime

offenders avoid

to participate

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in these

activities

owing to job facilities they get by learning soft

skill

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in jail .

Therefore

, I strongly advocate

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this

notion as these measures will be taken ultimately

crime

rate will be reduced. In conclusion,

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death

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penalty

is considers

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as

best

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the best

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way by some individuals

but

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some other measures

helps

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to eradicate

this

predicament from grass root level if

people

get

desire

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earning

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with job satisfaction there is no

crime

in society.