Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Although

it is undeniable that fossil

fuels

remain one of the most essential

energy

sources for human existence, there is an increasing number of nations replacing fossil

fuels

with

alternative

energy

. From my perspective, the use of

alternative

sources of

energy

is an advantageous trend and their use should be encouraged

further

. Fossil

fuels

have adverse impacts and a world run on fossil

fuels

is not sustainable.

First

of all, they are the main culprit causing pollution. Almost every machine and vehicle need fossil

fuels

to operate.

However

, these petroleum-powered emissions emit tremendous amounts of pollutants into the atmosphere every day which would lead to

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haze of air pollution.

Therefore

, over-reliance on fossil

fuels

can cause a devastating consequence

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the environment.

Second

of all, fossil

fuels

are non-renewable and

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going

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to run out. Because of human’s great demand for daily life and industrialization, fossil

fuels

are overexploited and overutilized.

As a result

, the depletion of fossil

fuels

could create an economic crisis if there are no

alternative

resources.

Alternative

energy

has lucrative impacts on the long-term development of the planet.

Firstly

, renewable sources are eco-friendly.

This

is because they produce clean

energy

which creates a pollution-free environment and increases the quality of our planet as well as life on earth.

For example

, the WHO organization reported the use of renewable

energy

has resulted in a reduction in greenhouse gas emissions, a decline in dependency on fossil fuel markets in European countries after they started relying more on solar

energy

10 years ago.

Secondly

, renewables are inexhaustible and cheaper than fossil

fuels

. According to a new report in 2020, renewables are now the world’s cheapest source of

energy

because of

its

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superabundance and easy installation.

Therefore

,

alternative

energy

is the most suitable to replace the fossil

fuels

that are about to be exhausted in the near future. In conclusion, the application of renewable

energy

in places of fossil fuel should be encouraged in every country thanks to a lot of positive effects on both environment and

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.