Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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it is undeniable that fossil

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remain one of the most essential

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sources for human existence, there is an increasing number of nations replacing fossil

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with

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energy

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. From my perspective, the use of

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sources of

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is an advantageous trend and their use should be encouraged

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. Fossil

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have adverse impacts and a world run on fossil

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is not sustainable.

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of all, they are the main culprit causing pollution. Almost every machine and vehicle need fossil

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to operate.

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, these petroleum-powered emissions emit tremendous amounts of pollutants into the atmosphere every day which would lead to

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haze of air pollution.

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, over-reliance on fossil

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can cause a devastating consequence

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the environment.

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of all, fossil

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are non-renewable and

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to run out. Because of human’s great demand for daily life and industrialization, fossil

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are overexploited and overutilized.

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, the depletion of fossil

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could create an economic crisis if there are no

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resources.

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energy

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has lucrative impacts on the long-term development of the planet.

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, renewable sources are eco-friendly.

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is because they produce clean

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which creates a pollution-free environment and increases the quality of our planet as well as life on earth.

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, the WHO organization reported the use of renewable

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has resulted in a reduction in greenhouse gas emissions, a decline in dependency on fossil fuel markets in European countries after they started relying more on solar

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10 years ago.

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, renewables are inexhaustible and cheaper than fossil

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. According to a new report in 2020, renewables are now the world’s cheapest source of

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because of

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superabundance and easy installation.

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,

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energy

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is the most suitable to replace the fossil

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that are about to be exhausted in the near future. In conclusion, the application of renewable

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in places of fossil fuel should be encouraged in every country thanks to a lot of positive effects on both environment and

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