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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#internet #newspapers
These days, it cannot be denied that the
Internet
 changes many ways of life. Some
people
 claim that
newspapers
 are less popular and outdated due to the growth of the
Internet
. I strongly agree with
this
 statement for several reasons which will be discussed in
this
 essay. The
internet
 has numerous benefits for
people
. The major reason is that reading
news
 on the
Internet
 is more convenient.
People
 can access information in real-time. To explain,
Internet
 allow reporters to update the most recent information to
people
. Breaking
news
 on websites,
for example
, always update current situations up to date.
In contrast
,
newspapers
 publish only one time of the day, mostly in the morning.
As a result
, they cannot interact with
people
 the same as
Internet
news
 does. Another reason is that the
Internet
 is eco-friendly. To produce
newspapers
, paper is required.
Therefore
, a number of trees are chopped down. Unfortunately, it
also
 becomes a waste after one day pass. While reading
news
 on
Internet
,
people
 need only electronic devices,
such
 as a mobile phone and a laptop to reach information. According to the research conducted by Oxford University, a large amount of
newspapers
 waste in London is significantly increase due to their costs and less popularity. In conclusion,
this
 essay feels totally agree with
this
 idea as the
Internet
 is more and more popular for
people
 while newspaper becomes less important.
This
 is because the
Internet
 is easily accessible and
environment
Replace the word
environmentally
show examples
 friendly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access
  • Convenient
  • Fast
  • Expensive
  • Wider range
  • News sources
  • Perspectives
  • Readership
  • Demographics
  • Physical
  • Tangible
  • Reading experience
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