In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this so? what can be done about this problem?
Food
has important
role to survive in Add an article
an important
this
world. This
essay will discussed
the main causes and the possible solutions.
On the one hand, most Change the verb form
discuss
of
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apply
the
people have no stable jobs to provide Correct article usage
apply
all
the needs of their family Change preposition
for all
in
a daily basis. Change preposition
on
For example
, our neighborhood
earned not so much every month because the Change the spelling
neighbourhood
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breadwinner
bread winner
of the family working in Correct your spelling
breadwinner
a
construction. Aside Remove the article
apply
for
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from
food
they also
need to pay bills and other stuff that is
why most of the time they don't
have enough money
to buy healthy foods. They always eat instant food
which is not appropriate because they have children who is
studying and need to eat properly. Change the verb form
are
This
way, I always saw those childs
begging for Correct your spelling
child
food
to
their playmates Change preposition
from
everytime
they have better Replace the word
every time
foods
. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Next
, lack of education
. In my country a lot
of unwanted pregnancies happening recently, because their parents are not guiding them the way it
should be. Because of that, early Correct pronoun usage
they
pregancy
occurs and Correct your spelling
pregnancy
usually
youngsters are the victims who don'Add a comma
,usually
t
have work yet or either studying. Moreover
, their future
children will suffer also
and die without having appropriate nutrinions
because their parents have no idea where to get enough Correct your spelling
nutrition
nutritions
money
for them.
On the other hand
, our government's should provide a lot
of jobs to help a lot
of people to have work and not to do crimes just to earned
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earn
money
, and also
parents should educate their children especially teenagers to have ideas about the future
if they don't
finished
their Change the verb form
finish
education
. One writer said,
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apply
education
is the key to success. If we have a degree and earn a lot
of money
in the future
. We can build a business that can help a lot
of people who doesn't
have work. So, they can provide food
and better life to their families.
To sum up, jobs and education
will be a great helped to everyone to have a stable life and have a better future
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...