Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

Over the past three decades, the number of private

cars

on the roads has skyrocketed in various capital cities all over the world, which results in

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massive

traffic

jam

. As being a driver in Bangkok, Thailand, I strongly agree with

this

statements

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Moreover

,

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essay will examine the effective measures that the government should implement for encouraging

people

to less

use

their

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cars

. Nowadays,

people

are prone to travel and commute by private

cars

than public transport due to its convenience, and affordable prices. For

this

reason, the road

are

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full

with

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cars

, and eventually one big

traffic

jam

. The Phahonyothin road can be a good example to illustrate the definition of

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jam

. Obviously, you need to spend at least a

hours

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to travel

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just 10

kilometers

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through

this

road.

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believe that it is faster to travel by

bicycles

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.

Therefore

, the aforementioned evidence indicates that the

traffic

jam

is real, and being

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trouble, that the government should make the solutions to it. One of the promising measures for ameliorating the vast majority of

cars

, and enabling to lure

people

to reduce the

car

use

includes

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increasing taxes on fuel and the

car

prices, and improving public transport.

Firstly

, higher

price

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for fuel and

cars

discourage citizens to buy

cars

because

with

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the higher outcome,

people

prefer to save

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money and take

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alternative options for transportation

that is

why the government should enhance the quality of public transports including buses, trains, and vans.

Moreover

, they should increase the train station in every

sub districts

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, and small

cities

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to facilitate

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the traveling

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traveling

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travelling

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of citizens. Since its more convenient and less money

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spend

spended

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,

people

turn to

use

more public

transpots

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transport

transports

and

use

less private

cars

. In summary, recently, numerous cities across the world have faced

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drastic increase in

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private

cars

resulting in

traffic

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a traffic

the traffic

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jam

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jams

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.

However

, rising

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fuel and

car

price

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prices

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and public

transpot

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transport

enhancement can be successful measures to mitigate the problem of

traffic

jams.