In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase In this essay. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase moreover. Consider adding a comma.
The word Hyper loop seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word air-planes doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The comma before the conjunction but also appears to be unnecessary. Consider removing it.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.