In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Construction of new railway lines for fast
trains
between towns, many
people
think it worth to spending large sums of money to develop public transportation and some
people
believe that it is unnecessary to spend on other public transport. In
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I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
To begin
with, travel by fast
trains
between cities has become popular in many countries around the world. In 2020 China launched a brand new fast
train
line and now it is the fastest
train
in the world,
moreover
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Elon Musk doing the fast
train
called
Hyper loop
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Hyperloop
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, he claimed that
this
is the fastest
train
in the
next
few years. By the way, travelling by high-speed
train
will make a
lot
of profit in each area.
For example
, more jobs for upcountry that lead to
people
around the station in upcountry will have a job and tourism could be easy to access.
As a result
, investment in high-speed
trains
will gain a
lot
of benefits for
people
and to cities.
On the other hand
, improving other public transport is very necessary as well,
such
as bus,van or even air-plane all of
this
will be making a profit to the country a
lot
.
For instance
, buses will transfer
people
to the city and
air-planes
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will fly between countries.
As a result
, apart from high-speed
trains
, buses and air-planes will give a
lot
of benefits not only
people
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in their country
,
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but
also
to tourism from overseas. In conclusion, I would say every public transportation is vital for driving the country and their citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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