Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
We all know
history
has an important role in our lives. It is argued that learning history
is a waste of time some thinks it is essential to know. Both situation
have Change to a plural noun
situations
different
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a different
perspective
and I firmly believe that Fix the agreement mistake
perspectives
history
is essential to learn.
On the one hand, studying history
is a waste of time because it is just a
Remove the article
apply
history
and not the recent one. For example
, most of them thinks
that we should focus on what is happening nowadays and know the possible solution to help our country to be better Change the verb form
think
in
the future generation. Change preposition
for
Thus
, history
will be in their hearts and they will not forget all the sacrifices they intended to do in the past centuries.
On the other hand
, they think it is essential to learn because we need to have backgrounds why this
infrastracture
build in the past years and what is the reason behind Correct your spelling
infrastructure
this
. We need to encourage teachers and parents to educate their children about history
because it will gain Change the pronoun
their
them
knowledge about the world before. Correct your spelling
the
For example
, in my country
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,country
as
Independence Day means we have freedom in the world. People in the past fight for Change preposition
apply
our
rights that we are having Change the word
the
know
. Our future child should know how to value Correct your spelling
now
this
day and know why we are celebrating it. Additionally
, our living lord has it's
own Replace the word
its
history
that we all should know. In comparison, Jesus sacrificed his own life just for us to have a better life.
To conclude, I firmly believe it is important to learn history
because what we are having know
is because of them. Correct your spelling
now
Finally
, history
will be history
and it will forever remain in our hearts.Submitted by RoseOrlaes on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite