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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, more and more individuals have been attending Universities and an argument has been raised whether students should pay for
this
 or it should be free to everyone.
Although
 there are convincing arguments on both sides, my opinion strongly favours the given statement.
This
 essay will give
further
 explanation. On the
first
 hand, one argument put forward in favour of charging students is that literacy is becoming very expensive to fund as universities grow in size. Make public pay for training can maintain the standards and ensure the quality of teaching. In ,addition adults can get a high paid job after graduating with higher qualifications so it is fair to pay some amount to an institution.
Last
, at least there is a shortage of manpower in many countries for some kinds of manual job. If people have to pay to college they might start to work in order to collect fees which teaches them the value of money and respect towards work.
On the other hand
, learning is the fundamental requirement of human beings which should be free to everyone. If people have to pay for education
then
 there won't be any equality among the high-class population and low-class population.
For instance
, children from poor families can not get proper literacy and won't be able to secure their future financially.
In addition
, Making higher education free can motivate a large number of people to attend higher qualifications
as a result
 there will be more opportunities for high paid jobs which can directly increase countries gross income. In the conclusion, education should be remained equally available to everyone regardless of income.
As a result
, nations can get more benefits from individuals which will be
last
 for the future as well.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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