in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
In the midst of
this
technology-driven global world
,there has
been lots of developments Change the verb form
have
happends
in the agricultural industry,Correct your spelling
happens
happened
eventhough
lots of Correct your spelling
even though
people
in the world
are still suffering with
not getting enough food or with Change preposition
from
fully
hunger. Change the adverb
full
This
is the fact what
is going on in our society nowadays. In Change preposition
of what
this
essay ,I will discuss about
,why it is happening and how can we solve Remove the preposition
apply
this
issue.
It is glad to see that our agricultural industry has grown alot
,admittedly most of the Correct your spelling
a lot
manpowers
are replaced by machines,Correct your spelling
manpower
as a result
, lots of people
had lost their job
. Previous
years hundreds of Change preposition
In previous
people
were working in a field for several days,however
,after imposing the machines hardly one or two
Add a hyphen
two-person
person
needed for handling the machine and it finishes the work faster than before,Change to a plural noun
people
hence
rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
people
became jobless. This
is the foremost reason for people
still go hungry. They have no job
, so no income therefore
they cannot buy food or raw materials for cooking. Another reason for this
is civilisation, most of the agricultural lands are used for other puposes
, Correct your spelling
purposes
for instance
, constucting
buildings for Correct your spelling
constructing
appartments
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apartments
as well as
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, as well as buisiness,
buisiness
uses. Apparently, Correct your spelling
business
population
increases day
by day
, at the same time, in some countries agricultural production is inversly
Correct your spelling
inversely
propotional
to Correct your spelling
proportional
population
.
For solving the first
reason,the best option is to educate all of them ,minimum of a job oriented
course, so that , they can get a Add a hyphen
job-oriented
job
and have an income for managing their day
today
life. Correct your spelling
to day
Next
is saving the agricultual
land. Government authorities Correct your spelling
agricultural
strrictly
Correct your spelling
strictly
advice
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advise
people
that, agricultural
area should use for that purpose only,if not they have to face legal action, Add an article
the agricultural
as a result
, production won't be decreasing. One more solution is to control population
,Correct article usage
the population
for
example
China Add a comma
,example
have
a strict rule that each couple should have only one child, Change the verb form
has
similarly
in those countries have
more Correct pronoun usage
that have
population
should follow the same rule.
To conclude, I can say that, only developing our agricultural industry can't feed all people
around the world
, we should make some more arrangements for that. We will succeed only when, there is atleast
a single Correct your spelling
at least
day
, without a hungry man in this
world
, then
only we can enjoy the worth of developments.Submitted by chinnucw on
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