Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that public spaces for sport

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and for the conviviality of local communities should be an investment made by private companies. The paragraphs below will outline a partial agreement with

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discussion, considering that these parks would be

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to encourage people to exercise and can enhance the enterprise's profit,

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,

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responsibility is not these businesses'.

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with, the main reason why I think that businesses should invest in leisure centres is due to the incentive for the population to practice outdoor activities.

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, in Fortaleza, a Brazilian city, a group of restaurants has reformed a lake localized in front of them. After

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, the local residents started using the surroundings to walk their dogs,

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jog and

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lift.

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, it is a positive aspect to people who live

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.

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, another cogent reason why I consider that companies should provide sports

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and recreation areas is because of the financial feedback these enterprises can experience in the future. To illustrate, using the same example aforementioned, following the park's infrastructure improvement, the number of new visitants has improved.

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, these restaurants'

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have risen due to the increased movement and new consumers. In stark contrast, in

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, I think that investing in public spaces for leisure activities is the government's responsibility, and should not be held by private companies. The taxes and fees charged are indeed for health, education, but

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for restoring public parks, lakes or

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for the population to use. To conclude, I somewhat agree that the construction of public spaces for sport and leisure should come from private initiatives. Despite the positive outcomes

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as the incentive to exercise and the increased company income in the coming months, I consider that

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should be held by the authorities.