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Some people like reading books for knowledge and pleasure; others prefer getting information and entertainment on the internet. What is your opinion? Write an essay at least 200 words.

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A number of people would love to broaden their horizons and derive pleasure from reading
books
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. Others,
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, would rather obtain information and entertainment online. From my perspective, I support the latter in that I believe it brings about many intangible benefits far outweighing its drawbacks. In the
first
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 place, it is undeniable that getting
news
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 and
data
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 on the
Internet
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 has a leading edge over any other conventional forms of media,
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 as newspapers or
books
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, due to its great convenience.
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, at the push of a button, we humans could gain access to thousands of
data
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 sources and entertainment forms from the world over, many of which we need not pay money for.
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,
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 prestigious
news
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 publishers as BBC or CNN are known to provide individuals with up-to-date knowledge complimentarily. What is more, not only is the information lastest and detailed but it
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 covers a wide variety of current affairs on different topics, ranging from politics to education or show business, etc.
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 could not be seen in
books
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 or specialized newspapers, where readers are only able to obtain a definite amount of
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 from authorized sources.
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, in some cases,
data
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 is spread by word of mouth, or recounted by a personal account, while
books
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 and articles are under strict laws of censorship.
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, to a certain extent, the
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 has its own disadvantage which would cause detriment to the netizens' orientation. To put it bluntly, information acquired on the
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 is at times misleading and inaccurate,
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 bringing out public furore and chaos. Take,
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, the case during the pandemic situation is that unauthorized and fallacious
news
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 is widely issued to baffle the inhabitants' mentality. Meanwhile, the knowledge contained in most
books
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 is worthwhile and thoroughly written before being published with a huge amount of the author's efforts. All things considered, while reading
books
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 could benefit us academically with authorized and carefully researched knowledge, obtaining
data
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 and entertainment on the
Internet
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 is the most prevalent means in modern times.
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, I voice approval of the latter, though it would be better off combining those two to make the most out of them.
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