Nowadays television and the Internet have a greater influence on children's behaviour than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days,

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and the Internet are essential factors associated with everyone's life.

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, kids' conduct is influenced by them more than their family. From my point of view, I agree with

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statement because their parents are busy throughout the day, and television and websites have interesting programs.

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, the primary reason why I agree with it is today mother and father have to work outside,

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several children have to live alone when they are finishing their studies.

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, they usually spend their leisure time with

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and the internet.

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, kids' behaviour will be influenced by them. My friend's son,

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, lives with their parents but both of them work from Monday to Saturday from 8 a.m. to 6 p.m. He usually lives alone on Saturday, and Youtube is his choice to spend time with. His conduct slowly changes to be an aggressive child. As my friend said, she believes her son take action as one of the characters on Youtube which he watched. The

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reason is children think

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television's programs and media

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websites are interesting.

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, they make the kids who usually watched them believe these are appropriate behaviour.

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, my niece

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with her father who is my uncle. He told me that his

daughter

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like to watch the ADE drama on

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and the Tiktok. After that, she often

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like the

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TikTok

or

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some

conducts

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as

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actress in the drama. She said she

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it is a

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thing because it is funny and several people like them

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her. To sum up, television and websites influence children's

behavior

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more than their

family

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families

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. I agree with it because their parents have to work outside

everyday

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, and information from both

TV

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and the internet are more

encorage

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encourage

them.