Some people say that children should learn all the subjects equally , whereas , others think that they should only learn what they are interested in it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that children should learn all the
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equally , whereas , others think that they should only learn what they are interested in it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. In
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highly competitive and contemporary era, education has played an imperative role in everyone's life.
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, there are different types of opinions of the two groups, whether pupils have to learn every
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to be sophisticated and enhance their
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or they must select a
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in which they have a fascination . Withstanding ,
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certainly vote for the latter perspective ,
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,both views will be analysed in the following paragraph before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. Examining the former view , the primary argument
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forward is undergraduates should be learnt each and every
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by the school as it is essential to mould them into better individuals in near future as well as
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future. By
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, I mean that students can enhance their
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if they tend to study all
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rather than looking for choosing some among all
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.
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, if learners avoid some
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like mathematics
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they may feel uncomfortable when they come to count their financial status. On the downside, the latter view suggests that if children do not have the interest to learn all
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they are unable to be attentive during learning those
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.
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is because they get bored while studying those
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. As a ,resulting they can't get what they are studying currently as they do not have that much interest in it.
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, people are not enough mature to learn all
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when it comes to at the grown-up level that it becomes a burden for them.
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, I would say junior can become well behaved and get enough
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subjects
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and feel superior if they learn the interesting
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. Conclusively, to wrap up the discussion ,
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Students should be taught every
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as it helps them to enhance their
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, I firmly believe that it is good to focus on those
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in which they have a fascination about that
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that will help them to give their best in their field as they can not feel burdened.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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