A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to your advertisement for the position of waiters and waitresses which was published in the Canberra Times newspaper yesterday. I would like to apply for

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position as I believe that I am ideally suited to the role. I am currently a full-time student at The Australian National University located near your

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, approximately 1

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from the Kin-Thai Kingston branch. Apart from my study’s time, I am working at the Lemon

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as a waitress. Since the Lemon

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is going to shut down

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month, I have to find another part-time job. Based on my experience, I believe that I could be an excellent waitress at your

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because I am hard-working, reliable, and friendly.

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, I get used to Thai’s dishes and can recommend menus

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. As you can see from my CV, I can speak Thai, English, and Chinese fluently. As your main customers are Australian and Chinese, I believe that I can support you to make better services. Please find enclosed my references and resume. I should be pleased to attend an interview

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time at your convenience. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jen

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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