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Some say that when a person achieves success in their job, it means that he/she is selfish and doesn’t care about others. Do you agree or disagree?

#say #person #success #job #doesn’t #care
It is believed by some that,
success
 can be achieved if an individual
become
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selfcentered
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self-centred
self centered
 and selfish. I do not agree with the
above said
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 idea because selfish
nature
 limits
the
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learning and does not lead to
accomplish
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 long
term
 goals .
To begin
 with, it is true that
selfish
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nature
 of an
indvidual
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individual
 allows them to limit
the
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learning.
This
 is because no
one
 is having full knowledge in all the fields and is versatile in
nature
.
Hence
 , in order to acquire it,
one
 has to share their ideas and thoughts with their peers and fellow members .
For instance
, a financial analyst may be good at his
work
 in finance but lack computer skills which
is
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 a
necessaty
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necessity
necessary
 in
current
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 scenario.For
this
, imparting information is much needed.
Furthermore
,
selfish
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the selfish
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nature
 of an individual fails them to achieve a long
term
 goal.
This
 is because a job is
a
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teamwork
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team
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teamwork
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work
. It requires people to coordinate and
work
 together to achieve a combined target. A person may achieve his goal individually if he is selfish in
nature
 and get
success
is
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in
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short
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the short
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term
 but in long
term
 may fail.
For example
, If out of 100
employess
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employees
, only 10 % does the desired
work
,
company
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the company
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wont
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won't
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 progress immensely and would lead to
diminish
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diminishing
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 stage and so does all the employees including the
one
's who are best in their
work
. To conclude ,It
a
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 argued by some that Job
success
 can only be achieved if an individual is selfish,
however
 in my opinion it only leads to limiting
the
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knowledge and hindering the growth in long
term
 perspective.
Hence
 in order to achieve
success
one
 has to impart and share
knowlege
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knowledge
amongts
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amongst
among
 them
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