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Unmanned vehicles will become more and more popular in the future. Passengers travelling inside these robot cars will be only human. Do you think the benefits of these surpass the drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
this
 ever-changing world,
technology
 has become a vital part
in
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 human life, especially
transportation
,
as a result
, unmanned
vehicles
 appeared and become more and more important in the future. Some
people
 said them to be
less
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benefits
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 than normal
vehicles
.
However
, my opinion is completely odd with
this
, I believe unmanned means of transport still bring us several
of
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advantages.
First
, a plethora of companies
which
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unmanned
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mean
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 of transport
are
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 able to save millions when
change
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 ordinary
vehicles
 into unmanned one. The industry of
transportation
 will break the ground by replacing a big amount of normal
transportation
 which
also
 mean the new changes from the
transportation
 companies. They will no longer hire
human
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 as
the
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drivers meanwhile the robots will do that.
These
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 does not only save money but
also
 attract many customers who want to try the new
technology
.
As a result
, the economics of a country will have
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incredible growth.
Secondly
, the
changing
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 in
transportation
 may help to improve the environment. When
whole
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of
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transportation
 system
change
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, a lot of other things will
be change
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 either.
For example
, those items of ordinary cars will no longer
produced
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 and
people
 are forced to use
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unmanned
vehicles
,
however
, those
vehicles
 have a higher price and it is hard for everyone to afford that. For that reason, they may have to use
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public
transportation
instead
 which will help to reduce
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air pollution and help our environment to be better.
Finally
,
vehicles
 without human control may help to reduce the death and injured index. When
technology
take
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 control of
the
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vehicles
, it will increase
the
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insurance and protect us from the
dangerous
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.
For example
,
people
 may experience car accidents due to drinking alcohol while driving or
the
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lost control of speed,
instead
,
technology
 helps us to avoid all of those situations and assure us to be safe.
However
, the
changing
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 in
system
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 of
transportation
 still exist several drawbacks which can not avoid. As drivers are replaced by robots, they will be unemployed and be unable to raise
family
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, afford the taxes or fees. It will lead to more and more
people
 who
poor
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 and homeless, which affect negatively to the society of a country. In
conclude
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, I want to emphasize the benefits of unmanned transportations
also
 there may still exist
the
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disadvantages.
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