The quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What could be the reasons behind this? What measures can be taken to resolve this problem.
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burgeoning populace in modern countries, a society opts for the GM system to produce more crops for Change the word
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the nation
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art. To commence with the benefits, using advanced GM techniques in farming, Linking Words
rancher
would produce enormous yields when compared to age-old techniques. So every individual obviously would get enough food for survival. Fix the agreement mistake
ranchers
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, in India, some Linking Words
population
use a variety of techniques for farming, Fix the agreement mistake
populations
they
bestow excellent results. Correct word choice
and they
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apply
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grower
may earn more than they earn now. producer in Fix the agreement mistake
growers
few
countries still live a downtrodden life. Correct article usage
a few
laborer
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labourer
are
not paid enough for their work. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
is a good option for them to earn more. To illustrate, tomatoes and grapes are Linking Words
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produced
this
method, but these are not healthy. Despite the benefits, there are ample drawbacks. Linking Words
Firstly
, Linking Words
this
new style is probably Linking Words
a the
burden for the economically backward. These foods are much more expensive than the traditionally grown ones. So normal crowd cannot afford to buy these items. Choose an article
a
the
For example
, nowadays a lot of supermarkets sell organic foods. Not only these are healthy but they Linking Words
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also
costly. Eventually, Add a missing verb
are also
local
public cannot afford these products. Add an article
the local
Secondly
, Linking Words
this
idea will take too much time Linking Words
for developing
. A lot of research has to be done on these varieties of crops. To simplify, for the past two decades, scientists have been researching Change preposition
to develop
this
system which has involved a high budget. Linking Words
To conclude
, the advantages of GM crops outweigh the disadvantages. So Linking Words
this
will give huge benefits to the developing countries in the future.Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion