Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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are
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for transportation these days but
railways
and
roads
have been must papular and important
ways
over the past a century.
However
, Some people think that
railways
is
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more
worthable
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workable
to invest
money
for
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developing in
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comparison
to
roads
. In my idea, both
way
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are
neccesery
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necessary
in terms of transporting. The
railweys
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railways
have been used for more than 150
yeasr
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years
year
when the
first
locomotive was made. It has developed until now that
trune
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true
tune
to one of the most important
ways
of
trasportation
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transportation
not only for travellers but
also
for goods.
furthermore
, new locomotives are so faster than the older model and those speeds can be up to 360 k/h which is faster than any
cars
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.
In addition
, based on accident statistics,
train
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trains
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are
more safe
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because it
is occurred
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rarly
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rarely
early
accidents.
Hence
, people think that government should
spending
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money
to construct
railways
rather than
roads
.
On the other hand
,
roads
are
essential
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way
connection
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especialy
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especially
fo
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local
trasportation
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transportation
for example
between two cities in a state.
Also
, the most important
points
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about
roads
is
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that
its
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construction is more
chiper
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cheaper
chipper
than the former
way
and it can easily
repare
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if need
fix
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.
Additionally
, it is more available for every people and every single person
not
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onle
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only
one
can go
to
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road trips without
need
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to special schedule but
also
it is one of
common
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ways
for product
trasportation
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transportation
between cities or even countries. Thereby, investing
money
to build and develop
roads
by authorities should be significant as well as
railways
. In conclusion,
this
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two
trasportaion
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transportation
ways
are the most
sognificant
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significant
way
for all countries
interms
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in terms
of
trevell
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travel
or export and
inporting
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importing
goods from all
part
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of their continents so without any
prioritize
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need spending
money
by governments.
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