Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
In recent years,
people
habits are changed towards their free time
. These days a significant portion of our society spend their free time
on smartphones, behind this
lot of interesting technologies in mobile phones
although
it has their own positive and negatives. In the course of I will discuss both sides and reasons for use
of the phone.
To begin
with, why do the masses spend their time
on modern phones
? the advancement in technology gives reason to use
phones
in their free time
, in this
period they can get information from the internet, they use
their phones
for their work meetings, and they entertain themself from websites. For example
, These days the latest information is available on the internet as the web of science and others. To connect with the world, they can use
a video call option in zoom call and other famous applications. In addition
, a study published last
year in the USA tell us a normal person spends more than two hours on Youtube and Facebook, on these sites he can entertain himself and make new friends over all the world.
However
, anything in this
world has its own negatives. Due to these smartphones, people
waste their free time
on them, basically, that free time
mind needs to relax and reboot it. For instance
, people
use
mostly their phones
at night time
before sleep which affect their minds. A light which exerts from the screen is very harmful to the eyes and it also
disturbs sleep.
In conclusion, people
use
their phones
to get information and entertain themselves in their free time
although
it has a negative side which kills free that minds need and effect on sleep.Submitted by mhassam7576 on
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