In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution and give your own opinion?
Traffic congestion is a
wildly
problem in Change the adverb
wild
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the city
city
, Fix the agreement mistake
cities
particulary
in developing Correct your spelling
particularly
country
. Increasing the private Fix the agreement mistake
countries
car
tax
and investing in public transportation seem
to be the answer Change the verb form
seems
of
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to
this
problem. From my view, I partial agree that this
solution will reduce the amout
of Correct your spelling
amount
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the car
a car
car
on the road because the effect Fix the agreement mistake
cars
with
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of
cost
of living and economic issues must be considered.
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the cost
To begin
with
the fact that higher Add a comma
,with
car
's tax
decrease the demand of Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
driver
in the street. In many Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
metropolis
, people prefer not to drive and count on train or Fix the agreement mistake
metropolises
bus
as Fix the agreement mistake
buses
a
main way to travel in the city. Normally, Change the article
the
government
will subsidise Add an article
the government
in
the Change preposition
apply
cost
of ticket
, if people considering Add an article
the ticket
a ticket
use
the public one result in low Change the form of the verb
using
cost
of living together with high quality of life for everyone. This
kind of situation supports the statement that the tax
rate should be increased and invest more in pubulic
properties.
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public
On the other hand
, more tax
means higher
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a higher
cost
of living. While public transportation is convenience
, having a can Replace the word
convenient
still
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is still
necessary
. Add a missing verb
be necessary
For example
, small
retail business which is not Add an article
a small
the small
runed
by Correct your spelling
run
professional
company has to Add an article
the professional
a professional
rise
the price of their product Correct your spelling
raise
as a result
of more logistic cost
. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Consequently
, customers suppos
to pay more for 1 meal and have less money for buying the Correct your spelling
supposed
suppose
others
consuming Correct quantifier usage
other
product
. Eventually, quality of life will Add an article
a product
be
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be decreased
decrease
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
decreased
improve
the quality of public transportation lead to more satisfaction and less traffic problem. Change the form of the verb
improving
However
, requesting more running cost
from car
owner also
result in indirect
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the indirect
an indirect
cost
of living. This
decision has no answer for how much cost
of having a car
should be but it would be better to neatly consider every factors
before collecting more money from people.Change to a singular noun
factor
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