In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution and give your own opinion?

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in the street. In many
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the public one result in low
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of living together with high quality of life for everyone.
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of more logistic
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the quality of public transportation lead to more satisfaction and less traffic problem.
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of living.
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of having a
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should be but it would be better to neatly consider every
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before collecting more money from people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traffic congestion
  • Emissions
  • Revenue generation
  • Public dissatisfaction
  • Political issues
  • Financial burden
  • Environmental benefits
  • Efficiency and accessibility
  • Taxation
  • Heavily taxing
  • Private car owners
  • Fund improvements
  • Discourage the use
  • Healthier environment
  • Public transport quality
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