Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

In the recent past the public said that
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we will live in peace, Yet a great life, due to the revolutionary pace in transportation, but here we are now dealing with a tragic situation through something called "
Traffic
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Then
will explain what is the Authority role to measure
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impact
and keep it under control.
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, I will jump through the statement of
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impact
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First
and for most, I can truly say, that the
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true and I truly can not deny it, because it is what we are facing about
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only the daily life routine, which we are dealing with, but with everything
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us, which it is really unnormal to keep it like
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nothing happened
such
as; Unorganized routes like what happened in Kuwait City
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specifically
on highway
roads
, which the Ministry Of The
Traffic
calculated the situation and found around 50% of car owners went through rough decisions and accidents, because of the
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unstructured
routes.
Then
, there are a variety of
traffic
signals, that could send drivers through serious
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injuries
with an
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Al-Jahra
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to humongous transitions and unbalanced asphalt
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, The population surplus could pace into horrific moments especially when they own cars. just imagine if each family within 5 to 6 persons and each one of them own vehicle, directly multiple it with the
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families and peers,
then
you will get massive results with the local communities who are creating
this
situation.
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the
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us, yet there will be a solution to minimize it, though it only belongs to the Authority, Which they have their role to provoke and manage it by establishing a clear vision of the road maps to spot weakness area, Using fixed
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cameras
camera
to monitor highway
roads
could help them to monitor the road conditions like what happened in Salmiya highway when the owners drive their vehicles the
traffic
lights directly manage it, though it helps to proceed efficiently and more effectively. After
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regulations to let the community use
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of vehicles like
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, Buses, Electric scooters,
In addition
, Public bus transportation.
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by minimizing useless parking lots to provide great space to the car owners. To sum up,
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to vanquish it, because it takes a matter of time and money to
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great support to control it.
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