Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

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In the recent past the public said that

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we will live in peace, Yet a great life, due to the revolutionary pace in transportation, but here we are now dealing with a tragic situation through something called "

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only the daily life routine, which we are dealing with, but with everything

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, which the Ministry Of The

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signals, that could send drivers through serious

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to humongous transitions and unbalanced asphalt

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, The population surplus could pace into horrific moments especially when they own cars. just imagine if each family within 5 to 6 persons and each one of them own vehicle, directly multiple it with the

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families and peers,

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situation.

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us, yet there will be a solution to minimize it, though it only belongs to the Authority, Which they have their role to provoke and manage it by establishing a clear vision of the road maps to spot weakness area, Using fixed

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could help them to monitor the road conditions like what happened in Salmiya highway when the owners drive their vehicles the

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lights directly manage it, though it helps to proceed efficiently and more effectively. After

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regulations to let the community use

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of vehicles like

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by minimizing useless parking lots to provide great space to the car owners. To sum up,

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to vanquish it, because it takes a matter of time and money to

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great support to control it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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471 words

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

Fully explain your ideas

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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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