Pollution is a serious issue that affects not only human health but also the environment such as qualities of air, soil, water, and food. Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,
pollution
emerges in every country on the earth, especially in developed countries. Some believe that this
issue attributes to both human healthcare and the environment
itself. This
essay proposes solutions in order to reduced
the impacts of that before a conclusion is reached.
Change the verb
reduce
First
of all, it is undeniable that pollution
is a severe problem, correlated with the devastation of the natural surroundings. The perfect solution for this
is that governments should cultivate their own citizens to preserve the environment
, beginning with small scales to large scales. For instance
, in Japan, there is a curriculum, teaching students that do not do harm to the environment
since littering garbage to the vast problems as deforestation and also
inform them results so that their citizens will perceive some knowledge of well-taking care of the environment
. As the result, the next
generation of adults will be more likely to decrease the creation of such
a
given Remove the article
apply
pollution
.
Furthermore
, governments should also
regulate the law, limiting the releasing level of pollution
companies made. This
is due to the fact that the majority of pollution
definitely come from those entrepreneurs, which have never been responsible for the environmental issue, only prioritized with their benefits. To be more precise, ecological research provides that amounts of carbon dioxide released from the industries were far more inordinate number than those from congestion made by automobiles from individuals, which not only lead to a destruction of airway respiration but destroy the layer of ozone also
. Hence
, it is important to change an
action of those industries to be well control of the pollutants Remove the article
apply
occurred
.
In conclusion, I personally believe that Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
although
the most of solutions was
responsible for the big industries that produced an amount of Change the verb form
were
pollution
, an individual should, therefore
, take care of the environmental situation as well. Moreover
, in order to tackle this
problem in the long run government also
need to encourage all hierarchy of citizens to preserve the environment
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